PollonsProductions's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bitters.]

Love the shading and good art style mang, Good luck in your future videos and never be afraid to challenge yourself into voice acting a little - or finding a friend to do it for yah

Tantemal responds:

Thanks for the feedback.

[The Animation Idea]

Genuinely enjoyed this my dude, Deserves a better rating but people are harsh to younger ones - Keep on it and keep looking out for animation programs that will utilize your potential more - Ifi ideas are hard try thinking of a scenerio that you think is objectively funny, And working it into a script in whichever way you feel works for you, If you ever have questions feel to ask

[be typical, gHoSt (kind-a freeden naw'll)]

It'sw always nice to have the audio a bit louder than the background track, Nice originality

LOCALTEEN responds:

So, I personally liked the way I mixed this. But I want them to be effective for others, too. Do you think it'd benefit from the voice track and music being more similar in volume?

[BENDY'S NEW GROOVE]

Shit, Definetely not bad by any account - Like others said the voice acting sticks out in a good way for sure

AnimatedZorox responds:

Aww thanks man! Those voice actors were the real heroes of this animation

[JzBoyEL SS2? Preview]

Clean animation style for sure- Yeah nice work

[Arius's Diligent Dudes loop (A.D.D.)]

Oh my this is a trip dude, Smooth movements for a hand drawn well done

[Talking to Strangers]

Good expectation killer at the end, One major note for me is the audio balance, Just to ensure all voices come out as loud as one another

[The Flight 2 Trailer 1]

A little bit of narrative could help us understand what it is that your advertising

[Shadic The hedgehog Trailer]

For trailers on newgrounds a short clip of the animation is better than a lengthy worded out explanation of what your'e creating, Perhaps get back at your creation, smooth out a short battle sccene and showcase a clip of that? Either way don't be disheartened by negative scoring and get at er ---- P.S It may be worthwhile starting with a smaller project for your first one, Cheers!

[Animation V.S Animator [Behind The Scenes]]

Dude the audio mute and replace with music